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-[* black] From the single USB-C port to the butterfly keyboard to the battery, Apple is eager to introduce us to their cutting-edge contraptions. In order to fit inside this slender gadget, Apple produced this economically form-fitting battery.
-[* black] Apple touts that its battery performance can last for up to nine hours of surfing the net or ten hours of iTunes video playback. We've heard the same promise from [guide|38268|this year's MacBook Air 11."|stepid=86839|new_window=true]
+[* black] From the single USB-C port, to the butterfly keyboard, to the battery, Apple is eager to introduce their cutting-edge contraptions. In order to power this slender gadget, Apple produced this form-fitting battery.
+[* black] Apple touts battery performance of up to nine hours surfing the net, or ten hours of iTunes video playback—not unlike that of [guide|38268|this year's MacBook Air 11."|stepid=86839|new_window=true]