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-[* black] We have reached the battery. This surface is packing a 42.2Wh 7.6V lithium ion [http://www.nbcnews.com/id/41916084/ns/technology_and_science-tech_and_gadgets/t/why-batteries-die/#.U6XqaBZ6BG5|time bomb|new_window=true].
-[* black] All batteries die, making battery replacement is a necessary repair for any device. Before we take a stab at disarming the bomb, we read the warnings.
-[* black] At first pry, we notice a lot of resistance, leaving us with the feeling that there is an ~~off-chance~~ high likelihood that we will destroy this battery in the removal, which makes us as nervous as the wicked witch around a bucket of water.
-[* black] time to get our pry on *insert high brow joke about prions*
+[* black] We have reached the battery. This Surface is packing a 42.2 Wh, 7.6 V, lithium ion [http://www.nbcnews.com/id/41916084/ns/technology_and_science-tech_and_gadgets/t/why-batteries-die/#.U6XqaBZ6BG5|time bomb|new_window=true].
+[* black] All batteries die, making battery replacement a necessary repair for any device. Before we take a stab at disarming the bomb, we read all the warnings that we plan to ignore.
+[* black] At first pry, we notice lots of resistance, leaving us with the feeling there's an ~~off-chance~~ high likelihood we'll destroy this battery during removalwhich makes us as nervous as the wicked witch around a bucket of water (that she has to pry open).
+[* black] Time to get our pry on *insert high-brow joke about prions*